Brian

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Gotta give replies time. Took over 48 hours for me to get the first review on my most recent story. You can also get people to review me by thanking ...

Reviewing this after I've read the chapter two... I like the dialogue here. It doesn't seem stilted, and you got descriptions and emotions to back it up with. Thought it ...

Oh thanks a lot Brian! Actually though the one you commented on wasn't the chapter one to this story. I'll go back and put the title on it for you. ...

I liked idea two. One of my favorite books when I was younger was about a kid who lead hundreds of others from Maine to Washington DC so as to ...

So, what I'm going for is unexpected, but easily imaginable? I wanted to avoid giving any advice since it's only my opinion, and an opinion that seems to differ from ...

Wednesday is spelled wrong in the first line of the second stanza. "And it was actually quite a treat to see them digestive " Do you mean digested? Even so, ...

Maybe it's your icon or something in between the lines (or both), but I got the feeling that this was about a dog. That's the first impression I got, but ...

There's a blank piece of artwork that hangs in one of the National Art galleries in DC. It's supposed to represent the lack of modern imagination. I thought it was ...

It's interesting as a thought provoking piece. Yet, I have to challenge it. Maybe where you live 9/11 was just a temporary interruption, but not up here around DC. Sure, ...

Congrats!

Brian, your statements hold as long as there is some "free" society outside of our own "peace-based" culture already at hand. If you don't have "free" (or so Americans think) ...

good smell

It's a hypothetical question Brad! Just as freedom cannot truly exist, neither can peace. But the fact that neither can really exist, it's beyond the point. A real world example ...