Brian

You must go to a weird school... although mine is kind of like that too. We had to read parts from the book of Exodus (from the bible) for english ...

Thanks!

It needs more depth. I really love your first paragraph, but it seems like you didn't pay as much attention to what came afterwards. It sounds very random and reads ...

Wow... I really like this. The flow is consistent, and your choice of words is exceptional. Only thing is, it's like a teaser! I read it, and wanted to keep ...

My name is Brian and I like mostly outdoors stuff, and writing too.

Oh gray threads, Will you envelop me Into a heart-warming embrace Of Brotherly love? To cover, to share the warmth That only you can provide? Oh, as I don you ...

Copy that! Troy yelled over the comm system in response to his wingman. The captain interrupted. Okay Gamma group, prepare for some alien butt! The four ships in Gamma were ...