Brian

Galatea, I was not thinking of you when I wrote that.

The semetic God and the Christian God are slightly different. The semetic God is beyond the values and judgements of human beings as Qi said. But the Christian God is ...

Like I've said before, the only thing humans have is our intelligence. But there are other, nearly as intelligent, creatures (once again, monkeys come to mind). An ape could be ...

There is a philosophical theory that what drives human progress is the subconcious knowledge that we don't have much time. As the theory goes, if we were somehow able to ...

While it is most certainly true that the leaders of the early church adapted or changed some teachings in order to garner more believers, I still do not put much ...

It's best to just ignore, or laugh at, psylynx :) I thought this joke was pretty funny. Of course, I think it applies to all politicians :P

So what's your favorite ancient civilization, and why? My favorite is by far Rome, with particular regard to the time of the Roman Republic from about 150 BC to 27 ...

Last time I checked over there, which was a while ago, TYWC had a six month wait for poems... I didn't even bother to check for stories. The code behind ...

I thought that this was really, really good. Your descriptions (e.g., pixelated) and word choice (e.g., ostentatious) are well done and add significantly to the overall feel of the poem. ...

I would get rid of: "with my skin all black and blue." Prior to this line, everything seemed rather poetic and eloquent, but this line made it trivial. It's also ...

I agree with Liz on the commas thing; you don't always need a comma at the end of a line, and too many will detract from the poem. There's a ...

I think you'll get a lot more critiques if you take the time to space out the paragraphs. Firstly, get rid of the chapters. There's no need for them in ...

I like the way you opened it up; it definitely grabbed my attention and made want to read more. You also kept my attention all the way through, no easy ...

All the other debates bore me (for the moment), so I made this one. So to begin, here's a quick run-down of some economic systems (albeit not all) that are ...

Wow, I remember when this site only had two users and every single post was Nate babbling about rules and how much he likes riddles. I bet YWS will have ...