Brian

YWS is hungry for lots of new stuff. The moderators keep the members in funky mood and enjoy global diversity throughout the forum when dinosaurs unleash absolutly unholy noises that ...

Hiya new person! I'm an oldie, but have the post number of a new person.

I have nothing else to add besides what backgroundbob wrote. The poem is well done, and the sensual imagery is great. The very last line is a bit awkward, but ...

I'm pretty sure that it is not possible. If you're having problems, pm Nate.

It's interesting and different, but it's kind of stale. The following sentence was awkward: "Treason, as C. confided in me, is ridiculously hard to prove, especially when their facts are ...

I read it once, hated it. Read it again, hated it more. Read it a third time, and well, hated it even more. I honestly cannot stand stuff like this. ...

As the title implies, I wrote this to be very specifically like the Hitchhikers Guide. Of course, the plot is different, but I'm shooting for the same general style. The ...

I did. It'd be great to read about YWS in Writer's Digest.

Actually Qi, you don't understand, just like you don't understand anything dealing with Christianity. Jesus said that He will come again, but only one more time and that one more ...

Very original and well done! You made it sound quite real.

Very analytical Snoink! Great poem! Thought it was hilarious, and I like the symbolism here as well.

Not to be nitpicky or anything, but in "At that time charlotte realized what she was doing," Charlotte should be capitalized. Anyways, these are all good excerpts. I liked the ...

Oh. My. God. My mind is fried... But I find grammatical mistakes! "and screamed and it turned out it was Alex’s mother, I knew she was a demonic aura from ...

I very much like the intent of this poem as it has an appeal to both sides of the political spectrum. I always like to believe that a soldier never ...

Some technical aspects... Either don't capitalize all I's or do; just don't go for a mix. Here I would suggest just going with capitalized all the way since the use ...