BradenPowell

Thanks so much for the review. Just so you know, I am keeping a few secrets and intend to raise a lot of questions in chapter 2. I also really ...

The reason that Max's personality isn't defined was because I wanted the readers to gradually profile him over a few chapters. I'll probably edit to include that bit about the ...

When I said splash I meant a few drops. But thanks for the review. A lot of what you said answered some difficult questions I was having, so thanks! The ...

I love the motzart comment XD. Also, I like to leave a space for dialogue, a blank line to be easy on the reader. I just read this for the ...

Thanks a lot for this review. I'm trying to work on the HE thing and the whole detailed thing is great advice. I was trying to hint at special abilities ...

Hi, thanks! I was really tired when I wrote this, I wrote it mainly so I would have a reason to continue with it and am going to re-upload a ...

1: Im from australia and actually know all about the hoodie thing. I was trying to actually say with the whole cold head thing that hoodies weren't actually exclusive to ...

Hey man, thanks for the review. He was concerned about his watch because he had to get the timing right. Failure to do so would have meant that he was ...