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Re: Melt - 1.2 - Falling Girls
It is hard to start from the beginning but I must. Okay. :) 1) You use 'she' more than the character's actual name in the first paragraph. That is okay, ...
Thu Jan 12, 2017 1:30 am
It is hard to start from the beginning but I must. Okay. :) 1) You use 'she' more than the character's actual name in the first paragraph. That is okay, ...
Thu Jan 12, 2017 1:30 am
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