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Why are people so stupid ? Why are people so mean ? They poke and prod comma And just won't stop until they hear you scream period Judgmental all day ...

Hey Charcoalspacewolfman, I started out my walk with only a few possessions and started off down the road. In a little while, I started tearing up and I had to ...

Hey Creative, It was a nice piece just I think you have something messed up. You spell out numbers less than or equal to ten. I had to measure it ...

Hey WelcomingException! freckle’s that ran across his nose I don’t think you need an apstrophy in freckles. I heard you were in town comma and had to invite you for ...

Hey Demoness, Empty Hearted : I felt like this was going to be a witty piece, but then you rhymed not with not... It just ruined it for me personally. ...

Hey Sarahjane97, I do agree with everyone else, we need more information. I felt like she was probably your mother. I liked the poem as whole. It was on the ...

Hey Wolfdra! I liked your story it was interesting. I've been watching Law and Order SVU all night so it kind of reminded me of that. You should try adding ...

Hey Chrstianwriter, The story seems like something they would play on ABC Family. I don't know if thats a complement, but it isn't bad? I'm interested in why the girl ...

Hey beautiful! Rawr, I'm here to review as promised! Hello comma here I think. you[b who make me smile Makes To me you’re very dear I’ll hold u close without ...

Hey, TDMitchell, I know that you probably wrote this awhile ago. I decided I’ll start from the begging! So here I go! But, as one usually does in their sleep ...

Hey Icyflames, I really liked your poem! It doesn't seem forced at all. It flowed really nicely. For as sure as the wind blows, Your lifetime has passed, As sure ...

Hey Taylor, I just don't like this poem. The topic is used over and over. Every rhyme after the original seems really forced like you used a rhyming dictionary for ...

Hey AardvarkSlave, shutting her dark It would help if you said what color. eyes tightly Her cellphone two words from which she had received the news The crackling of her ...

Hey pyro, Oh my God... when I got to the end... I just.... Good job! It was really, really good. I NEVER expected it coming! Your writing was really good ...

Hey Blacksheep, I really liked the colors in your picture. The hands were pretty good. Well, all hands look good to me I fail at drawing them! The proportions of ...