Boolovesyou

What is my true purpise of life ? purpose And what will I become if not successful ? successful What will I achieve if I don't believe ? What if ...

Hey LindsayG, I'll start off with corrections: I'm so innocuous comma yet frightingly blunt Since ‘frightingly’ Isn’t a word, and doesn’t sound nice at all try ‘frightfully’ So forgive me ...

Hey emily, A few corrections: I walked alone. w W hile I raise my wings the empty corn stands shivering comma and the ghost flowers now rul At the beginning ...

Hey Maki-Chan, I made some corrections: She froze as she witnessed the hell fire devouring her kin comma and destroying the only home she had ever known.  Crimson blood skin ...

I want to be forever young to smile at the world comma and spread my good mood Remove the sorrows comma ignite the joy comma and douse pain # I ...

Hey Emoticon, No no no, It simply isn't right! No, no, no, should welcome you to Underland comma and wonder comma haha comma exactly how you came to be here. ...

Hey Letlovefly, I loved your imagery in the beginning! It was really good. The way you described things, I feel like you wrote thing as a descriptive short story. I ...

Hey Joshwaa, Okay first off a misspelling : With the colors of aesthetic truth. I think you mean anesthetic. As for the poem, I liked it. Some places I feel ...

Hey Passion, I dig it. Your poem is pretty. I do think you mention " around the world, earth ect..." to many times. I only caught one error: Moving so ...

Hey RieOngaku, First off you have the wrong section. There is a section for lyrics! Which this definitely is a song not a poem. As for the song it was ...

Hey Ultimate, Here's are a few mistakes : She hoped that he brung her to safety brought The land stood quite, under the blanket of darkness that expanded around the ...

Hey TAZmania, To be honestly this story wasn't that much of a shock to me. Instead of putting detail and feeling into the story, you just told me a quick ...

Hey Maddee, Not much to say other then a few mistakes, body shaking violently, uncontrolably. Uncontrollably Oozing chrimson liquid dripping down onto the dusty ground, Crimson I turned in the ...

Hey Subjectblue, I loved your rhyming! You have no grammar or spelling mistakes as far as I can see. There was one rhyme I really loved. The grim walls are ...

Hey popatemyheart, I only saw one mistake! Here it is : While doctors move my insides. I think you meant this the me a comma. like nothing As for the ...