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Hey Secrets, You have a cute poem here. I don't mean it as a bad thing, but for some reason I think its a cute rhyme. I did like it ...

Hey Shadow, You're the lucky winner of my 3 AM review! Aren't you happy? For the poem, I really liked you message. I completely relate to how you feel, and ...

Hey guys I know this probably needs work. Well, I think so. Enjoy. Trembling, I reach for his hand, tears are welling up in my eyes. It couldn’t be. It’s ...

Hey Tgirly, I really liked your poem. It reminds me of this book I read where this girl wrote letters to her future husband. Nicely done! PM me or post ...

Hey Goa, First off. I love your poem. Its really nicely written! Congrats. So no complaints about it other then some spelling issues. awkward silence in each other's presance. Presence ...

Hey Urban! She’s sitting on the dark and dusty floor The bathroom stall is filled with the hate inside of her comma But this doesn’t help so she lies to ...

Hey Shiney, This is really nice. I was wondering why he didn't have more scale or something, like most dragons do. His eye is a bit confusing, just because I ...

Hey Jackle, I’ll start with the corrections: Russell’s pale comma green jeep was parked on the dirt driveway Then they You mean the black ooze cause you say they kept ...

Hey Justtrying, You have really good grammar and punctuation, and I can't say that to many so congrats! I liked the poem I only had one concern, and its not ...

Hey Youwish, First off one error: Iil I'll Try To Bottle Your poem has a lack of punctuation, which is very important! Like her for example : You Got You ...

Hey WriteWriter, Few corrections : I've learned to fly like an eagle, In this vast nothingnes, nothingness I've flown across the major seas comma And swallowed the ocean whole period ...

Dream Big, Open Your Eyes, And See. Try To Touch The Sky. Try To Flow Like The Sea. Be Happy As a bird. Dream Big, You Can Do It, Don't ...

I wandered into the cold breeze like a soldier period The thought of forgetting everything I had encountered, Split the line here. just for a second, brought a tear to ...

Hey Kim, So your poem was good except the way you spilt the lines. This may help. I lost my heart in a storm, the one I trust just lost ...

Hey Temi, I liked your poem, but like the others said it was too rushed. You give a good story line, but thats what I feel it should be. A ...