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Hey guy, wrote this about my boyfriend of five years. Enjoy! Somewhere in this world, Lay genuine untouched feelings. Not yet broken by human folly , Or just simple tragedy. ...

Hey Cailey! I’ll kick this off with corrections! Then, one cold winter day, I think you should make this a new paragraph Haha, this was funny to me anyways. As ...

Hey Priceless, I’ll just kick it off with corrections! He felt prickles all over him comma and knew the neighbors were watching. She sat in the taxi comma and closed ...

Hey guys this wouldn't let me upload the picture, and yes I know how. It was just messed up. Any way this was my day modeling my best friend Alison. ...

Hey Housecat, Okay! Here to review! Photo 1: Seems like you just snapped this picture, so nothing special. You do have a cute dog, but I think perhaps when taking ...

Done and done! Enjoy the reviews!

Hey Kj, I'll start off with things that need work or fixing! his eyes burned like fire. This comparison was just boring since you've already been talking about fire. beneath ...

Hey Court, For startersI really wish you had posted this on the site, and not given us a link. Its not a big deal though! I will start with little ...

Hey everyone! What I will review : - Poetry - Art and Photography - Action/Adventure Short Stories - Fantasy Short Stories - Romantic Short Stories - General Short Stories - ...

Hey Shiney! thanks!

Hey I'll start you off! thanks!

1000319-00-01-00-00_lg.png For the 30 service members who died Saturday in a Taliban attack on a CH-47 Chinook helicopter in Afghanistan. My prayers are with all who were affected. M.I.A I ...

Hey Explosive, This is a really well written piece other then the lack of commas, and I think you should split it differently. My lungs are empty, shriveled like popped ...

Hey Kiki, Ah, a nice not intense poem. Thank you. You made me smile when I like in a very bad mood! I also understand waiting for mail. Hah. I ...