Young Writers Society

Alright, well first off the changes in tense. Also you have good sentence structure, but then for example the last line you jump to a whole new subject in a ...

Thanks for the review. I just recently realized i posted the not corrected version of my story, so if I can find that corrected file i will have it up ...

Hey, i am new too. I feel like a noob when i play modern warfare against real people. xD they always shoot me in the back of the head. Lol ...

Your poem it a bit typical. You should expanding your horizons. For example, next time try writing from another person perspective. It may help keep people interested, and you do ...

Ah, Misguided ghost is my favorite song by paramore. When i saw the name i knew i had to read it. ^.^ Maybe I shouldn't, 'but maybe you should!' Shut ...

Ah, Misguided ghost is my favorite song by paramore. When i saw the name i knew i had to read it. ^.^ Maybe I shouldn't, 'but maybe you should!' Shut ...

This is an awesome poem. I love the the rhythm of it. "I'm supposed to die for something, but would it die for me? Is it true that death, is ...

Hey can you review this for me please? =D

Ginny used to be normal; a petite girl with big dreams. She yearned to be a big time actress. Above all she just wanted to be perceived as a dazzling ...

1. Do you think anyone can become a published writer? I believe anyone CAN BE a writer, but its how you manipulate your words to bring people into what you ...