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Re: Any good books I can try?
I love the fallowing books: Willow Dead tossed waves Go ask alice ( this one maybe to old for you since it was to old for me and has content ...
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Re: Tears Of Silence
I think it is a little to long for a song, but it is really good.
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Re: Sing Song Love Song
Thanks guys , i did not check the spelling after i posted it. I tried to fix it up some. This is a really old poem. I think I wrote ...
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Re: Similes
I want to see if you guys have come up with any pretty similes. =p A Similes is a sort of comparison. Examples : As clear as mud The water ...
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Re: Find obese pigeons here.
Bubble one is defiantly amazing, but they are all really pretty.
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Find obese pigeons here.
Bubble one is defiantly amazing, but they are all really pretty.
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Heart
Awesome =D hope you do not mind if i try to draw this. The coloring is amazing o.o
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Re: Abstract Horse
Amazing and SO artistic. wish i could draw like that. =]
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Sing Song Love Song
I wrote this SO long ago, I realize its in a sing song format. However, I wrote this for my love so please criticize and compliment. =D I want to ...
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Re: The Shallow Children with Hollow Hearts
Its a really great descriptive, beautifully worded poem, however i think you just crossed over into a "sing-song" rhythm.
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Re: Rhyming Poems
rhyming is great but do not make it to sing-song like then it seems immature almost. Its a thin line between rhythm and sing-song like.
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Re: Glittering Frost
Awesome descriptive words =]
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Re: The Best Friend
It was interesting but did not make much sense
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Re: Paradise Found
Great Poem , but need some work.
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Re: wristbiter
Wow. This is amazing! =D Not only did you manage to write a poem of suicide with out it sounding whiney and pathetic, but your chooses of words are spectacular. ...
Dec 1, 2010
