Boolovesyou

This is a special type of format for a poem. If you want to see the original format look up "Abuelito Who" by Sandra Cisneros. This was a class assigned ...

So, the beginning of the story is confusing. You begin by saying you feel nothing, while the attack is going on? This does not make sense... It seems the main ...

It is a little sketchy that you are steeling the name of a Green Day song. Other then that I liked it.

I have most definitely learned a lesson from this one : Spend more then 20 minutes on a poem. Heh. Okay im rewriting this.

This reminds my of "The Bells" by Edgar Allen Poe. You should check it out.

I will review anything, but Sci-fi, LONG stories ( I love short ones though ), and lyrics Probability is if you ASK me to review I will be harsh...

ok, i worked three hours on this , then my browser closed which erased everything , and i forgot the whole thing .... now its horrible. i tried my best ...

This is an amazing poem im a big fan of it =]

So.. This is my first try of embodying a tree, or any object. I was not just writing from a tree. I was trying to combine the story of a ...

Oh and the last line when thing look up. awesome. I wish I could write that well. Putting emotions in to words is not as easy as it looks.

This covers tons of emotions people feel all the time, but it seems like your writing it from a depressed persons point of view. Which to be honest, I love. ...

Gotta admit not my type of story, but it was really interesting.

Nice, but embaressing.

This is so amazing. I can not say i have not wished to get pay back at some bullies. I liked the name thing. Great foreshadowing there! I loved it. ...

Beautiful poem. Blissful Goodbye. Love it! =D