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Re: Exploring
IMG_2054.jpg DSCF2491.jpg Don't review this one. I just like the cute froggy we found, and thought you'd enjoy it. =p IMG_1949.jpg DSCF2515.jpg DSCF2510.jpg DSCF2507.jpg
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Modeling Emily
Modeling my sister. DSCF2665.jpg DSCF2506.jpg DSCF2505.jpg DSCF2502.jpg
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Infected With You
You don’t think it hurts? You don’t think I cried? Or spent endless hours Remembering our Good-bye You don’t think I hated you? You don’t think I forgave you? After ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Blade-Song
Hey Pyro! I really enjoyed this. A lot better then cutter's poems I could write! You did a very good job! And tell me of Calm Death's fair trade. Fair? ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Hide And Seek
Hey Sakura, I really liked this poem. Nicely written. I can tell you have some experience by it. Good job! Few issues: I turn away, wounded, I cannot bear bare ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Dearest Max,
Hey Kaf, You really REALLY need to work on grammar. Watch those run on sentences. As far as context it was nicely written. Some parts have to much descriptions. C ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Trapped
Hey Wish, My only real problem with this is GRAMMAR! You need it desperately. I think I got what you're trying to say, but I'm not sure. As for context ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: I'm Not Perfect.
I mperfection beats me, but M ind must beat matter. N ot as easy as puzzle, O wned by all my sins. T ry to P iece me together, E ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: My thoughts on my children’s tales.
DELETED. >.>.
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: A Child's Dream
Hey Anna, I really like the poem, I loved it actually. But I do have some corrections and suggestions. She’s running comma Till she sees a line of people standing ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Beauty in Dirt
Pictures I took when I went out exploring with my sister. Enjoy! Lions.jpg IMG_2064.jpg IMG_2062.jpg IMG_2056.jpg IMG_2016.jpg IMG_1995.jpg IMG_1955.jpg IMG_1885.jpg
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Alison in Wonderland (Redo)
Hey guys, this wouldn't let me upload the pictures the first time I posted these. It was just messed up. Any way this was my day modeling my best friend ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Gone with the Wind (A Critique)
Hey Painting! Just have a few spelling errors here for you fix! this means hardship and devestation, but also love and togetherness. Devastation Scarlett, she has placed a bit of ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: I need help Believing....
Hey Cutie, SOO. This poem has a good plot, but it needs more meshing out. Parts don't play out like they did in your head to the reader. I need ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Screwed Me Over from the Start
Hey Cutie, But I think is you get rid of the 'but' it would flow more. Less conjunctions the better. Don't just do it cause I said it. Read it ...
Aug 28, 2011