Young Writers Society

IMG_2054.jpg DSCF2491.jpg Don't review this one. I just like the cute froggy we found, and thought you'd enjoy it. =p IMG_1949.jpg DSCF2515.jpg DSCF2510.jpg DSCF2507.jpg

Modeling my sister. DSCF2665.jpg DSCF2506.jpg DSCF2505.jpg DSCF2502.jpg

You don’t think it hurts? You don’t think I cried? Or spent endless hours Remembering our Good-bye You don’t think I hated you? You don’t think I forgave you? After ...

Hey Pyro! I really enjoyed this. A lot better then cutter's poems I could write! You did a very good job! And tell me of Calm Death's fair trade. Fair? ...

Hey Sakura, I really liked this poem. Nicely written. I can tell you have some experience by it. Good job! Few issues: I turn away, wounded, I cannot bear bare ...

Hey Kaf, You really REALLY need to work on grammar. Watch those run on sentences. As far as context it was nicely written. Some parts have to much descriptions. C ...

Hey Wish, My only real problem with this is GRAMMAR! You need it desperately. I think I got what you're trying to say, but I'm not sure. As for context ...

I mperfection beats me, but M ind must beat matter. N ot as easy as puzzle, O wned by all my sins. T ry to P iece me together, E ...

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Hey Anna, I really like the poem, I loved it actually. But I do have some corrections and suggestions. She’s running comma Till she sees a line of people standing ...

Pictures I took when I went out exploring with my sister. Enjoy! Lions.jpg IMG_2064.jpg IMG_2062.jpg IMG_2056.jpg IMG_2016.jpg IMG_1995.jpg IMG_1955.jpg IMG_1885.jpg

Hey guys, this wouldn't let me upload the pictures the first time I posted these. It was just messed up. Any way this was my day modeling my best friend ...

Hey Painting! Just have a few spelling errors here for you fix! this means hardship and devestation, but also love and togetherness. Devastation Scarlett, she has placed a bit of ...

Hey Cutie, SOO. This poem has a good plot, but it needs more meshing out. Parts don't play out like they did in your head to the reader. I need ...

Hey Cutie, But I think is you get rid of the 'but' it would flow more. Less conjunctions the better. Don't just do it cause I said it. Read it ...