Boolovesyou

Outcast Everytime I come here, Everytime I say something, I feel a silent snigger, Awkward line. You lot mimicking me. So what, I may be younger, So what, I may ...

I was going to click the 'submit' button on the tab. I couldn't find it. I realised it was hidden under a serious amount of 'unuse dust'. *coughs* Yes, it's ...

This was intense. I only have a few things I need to point out. My text will be in bold. If correcting grammar will be red, and if I see ...

[quote="seana"]Short story, enjoy! "Large latte, please." I said in a timmid voice to the guy stood serving coffe . He looked down at me and I saw a slight smile ...

The Earth is big. The Earth is stong. It's getting weaker, For it won't be long, The idea of saying "For" probably went with the rhythm, but it doesn't fit ...

The photo quality is quite poor, and the lamp looks like you took a black marker and drew it. Its a good photo other then that.

I remember when we used to sit together. During nap time, at lunch, even when we used to stare at stars through your glass window. I remember the first day ...

I was inspired by the weather. I'm not much of a poet, but I get the occasional spurt of (probably misplaced) confidence to try my pen at one, so feel ...

Really cool.

The day you died; When you left me behind. Without a note... Not a kiss, No goodbye... Very nice beginning. When you committed suicide . This line was so blunt ...

So, I will review poetry and short stories. The Sci-fi stuff not so much.

This is the beginning of a short story im working on. Sort of a rough draft still, but I wanted to put it up. Remember I am continuously changing it, ...

The sun. Harsh and cruel it shone through my window, magnified. It awakened me to your betrayal. Yes a betrayal! You ate them up, one by one, little white pills ...

Awesome photography . The eyes are my favorite, and cute little girl too . =]

Remember its a format. Some lines you can't change with out going out of format.