Boolovesyou

This is an amazing poem, and I believe that its to far above my abilities to write, to judge. Its really good.

Myfallenheart.jpg I want you, I want you, I need you.

It's a concrete paved out world out there, Scrap metal danglen' though the air. When I look to the west I see a scrap yard, Torn out concrete all cracked ...

I am not very proud of this poem, but I figured I would post it to get suggestions. So go ahead and judge harshly. Light screams from your eyes, a ...

This page it waits. My words it takes. They gouge and burn, Hurt, as the turn. In my mind, I try to find, If this is meant to be. My ...

[/quote]Ok, not sure how I feel about this one, but I need feedback! It doesn't matter what you have to say-say it. Enjoy! A colony of ants march period or ...

This is basically notes not so much poem, but I was trying to find inspiration ? My body has no weight. Through the silky water everything is slightly larger. The ...

Looking for anything to review, but lyrics and sci-fi stuff. :D

I love it so much I don't want to nitpick it =p

Alright, I finished both of yours.

She dances like an angel: A colon introduces a list of thing. ( I am sure you know that.) You can get rid of the colon and put a period. ...

So, I asked you to reply this before, but you were having a bad week sooo here it is again. Its a special format poem. If you can't, I understand.

Hello there, Boolovesyou! I hope you are having a good day. ;) Now, I shan't focus on the nitpicks in this short story, because for the most part the users ...

The Ballerina- I think you should relax her shoulders a bit. It would give a more feminine look. The Girl- ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ONE. For some reason the one part ...

My first attempt at taking photo's with a Christmas theme :) Very cute, and I love the focusing.