Boolovesyou

Alright =D I liked the poem. I am, at the moment, in french one so this taught me a lot. However, to review the poem I took out the french ...

These are definiatly intresting, and have intrested me in the form of the poem you were writing. I think your words may need a little more work.

Hey! Great story! Only a few nit picks. Cigarette smoke wafts through the air, mixing with the scent of woodstove and weed. It reminds me when we first entered the ...

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Beautiful beyond compare, A scarlet rose in bloom, Your eyes are bright, your face as fair, As stars about the moon. favorite part. You hold a secret power; Deep within ...

The first one is my favorite!

This isn't that creative. Its not rhymed or special. Honestly it needs a lot of work...

You must have an amazing camera ! The moon is really good, but maybe add more to the picture some how. The sky I enjoyed as well too, the fire ...

Really good! the lines are fantastic!

Four letters changed my life, just four, not one more. I love the internal rhyme, you should make more! You may wonder what they were, Love? I thought it was. ...

Im not really an angry person! I just sometimes remember who I used to be, and who made me who I used to be and get angry. This wasn't really ...

Being little was so fun, I used to play and run, And pick up lots of bugs, Then drag dirt over rugs. Maybe play peek-a-boo, And I couldn't tie my ...

Shaking, thoughts racing teeth clenched voices raising. (anger) First off the (anger) I don't think is needed. I understand why its there, and it doesn't really bother me as much ...

Its intriguing and it grabs you. A would add more details, but not to the lines you have. Add more. I personally say don't scrap it. I like it.

Its been a year since you have been able to choke her. You cannot reach her from your dungeon. Hate has swallowed you. You are drowning in your fake pool ...