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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Turn Me Down

    Oh I forgot! Sorry About the only think in this world, think should be thing.

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Skin

    I liked it, but it felt like a child's book. Its needs more meat to be a poem.

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Turn Me Down

    If these are suppose to be lyrics, you need a chorus. I'm going to look at it as a poem. It’s everything I knew, Everything but you. This part of ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Running From Myself

    Hey! Okay, so let me start off by saying, you are a really good writer. Your descriptive with a hint of mysterious, the kind of things that keep people reading. ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I Danced With the Devil.

    I Danced with the Devil. This is just basically an outline of the story im writing. I saved my self once, I refused help. I didn’t need drugs to save ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: True Face and Bleeding Heart

    Bleeding heart I would give up my life I would give up my bleeding heart but there is not much more for you to tear apart Just a lost girl ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Crumpled Towel Study

    WOW. This is really good for 40 minutes. Its looks a bit like crumpled paper though. Maybe you should add more details to make it more towelish? I'm not a ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Flower painting

    I've never painted anything before, but this is really beautiful. I love the shades,but you could make it a bit brighter to REALLY stand out. =p I love it.

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Keychain Doll

    Ah, nothing showed up.

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Bits of bits.

    One request, if you don't feel like reviewing all this please review the poems first. No Name Everyday I push thoughts of you away Everyday I hurt for those things ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Sparrow's Nest

    Hello! I'll read this poem and automatically thought it was great. It was fluent and spot on rhyming. When you grow up and fledge your wings Fledged is a bit ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Eyes of a stranger

    You have amazing rhyming here. I mean you have it spot on. I love the poem, and I have tried writing a poem like this before. Its awesome! I have ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Doodles

    Alright I did color them both on photoshop, but the ballet one didn't work out. The computer froze and I lost it when I had just finished.

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: sometimes

    Hey! First I would like to point out you need punctuation. Its hard to understand with out it. I also think you should get rid "you're" and actually right you ...

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Romeo and Juliet

    Hand in hand Heart to Heart No command Love from the start Hate grown like a tree Love conquered that which could not be Tragedy sparked a fire Consumed in ...

    Feb 10, 2011


"In my contact with people I find that, as a rule, it is only the little, narrow people who live for themselves, who never read good books, who do not travel, who never open up their souls in a way to permit them to come into contact with other souls -- with the great outside world."
— Booker T. Washington, Up From Slavery