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Re: Untitled
The poem, while a good idea, lacks emotions. The last stanza is only part I could see emotion, and very little at that. While brilliant its bland. This mind thinks ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Mustard's condiments all over your Art
Hey I wrote this short story. It'd be awesome if you'd review it. Heres the link!
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: I'm on a strict all review diet!
Hey I just wrote this weird story. Its short but on dark side, and I've never written anything like this before. If you review it, it would be great. Heres ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Bluesi Reviewsi
Hey I have a story I'd appreciate if you could review. Its a little on the dark side though, and has some cussing. Just warning you. Its called Wall of ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: And I'm Proud
Hey! I love the poem, except as it goes further in the rhyme stops or gets ... bad. First stanza - amazing and they aren't all bad. I love the ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Wall of Perfect Pictures
I pop the pink pill. The one little pill that keeps me from slicing my wrist open today. The pink pill which in the world of pills I’ve seen is ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Eyesight
Blind: adjective unable to see; sightless. most people who are blind have no vision and while yours is 20:20, you look but you don't see. How could you miss the ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: The Stalking Thought
Silence Fills my room. Confusion You must assume. Regret Reminds me of the past. Doubt That this won’t last. Haunt Is what it is. Forget Is what it needs. My ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Outside your window
The name suggest a very stalker like poem. xD I liked it though.
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Will Review For [s]Food[/s] HUGS <3 (closed)
Will you review this for me?
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Come to the Revewin' Restaurant!
All right this is a poem I wrote, its kind of unique. I hope you like it!
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Psudiname: private reviewer... I like the sound of that
Alright, I'll start this off for you! Will you review this poetry for me!
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: If You Saw the World How I Do.
If You Saw the World How I Do, you would see that a single ice crystal, fallen from the sky, is a world on which I live upon. It melts ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: The Young Old One - Deleted
Its good, I'm just going to point out some spelling errors. But she is a sacred tresure , An endangered flower Who is never to be mesured Nor even devourd ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Alice's World
5’8 and radiant, Alice sauntered down the side walk allowing society admire her beauty. She had a slender, flawless body, anyone would be envious of. Finally. It was only a ...
Mar 23, 2011
