Boolovesyou

Snow is very controversial topic. Some people hate it and some people love it. Of course there are the ones, Who take it as it is. It’s cold and wet, ...

."The old days when humans were cargo are found in grave yards, with tomb stones that mimick Mimic that no man is truely good truly and boney, blood-dried fingers. Bony ...

Don't cry, tears of steel Sometimes it's better not to feel Don't cry, wipe your eyes Just remember all the lies Don't cry, let it out In a red river ...

Oh, I loved it! Its beautiful, and poetic. Only few nitpicks. Niki's everything I wish I could be These word are over used. Strong and brave and beautiful Read aloud, ...

Unavailable is a beautiful word I am Unavailable If you move this to the end of this stanza, the poem would have more of a form. Right now it has ...

Okay this is how I'm going to do this a weird way. There are lines I just really don't like, not a lot but some. I will make them red. ...

I’m standing here looking down To an endless eternity The laughter in my ears Screaming so loud That I can’t stand anymore of it Anymore? When you say anymore it ...

“ Crazy ” Elisa spits the word like its some foul, disgusting thing of evil. “ Mentally Deranged? INSANE!?” “ Elisa, honey calm down.” Martha tries to soothe her. “ ...

I like this poem it was really.... Spaced out o.o! Okay just these paragraph u may want to clear up cause they are confusing! Lie to your friends while I ...

I like this poem it was really.... Spaced out o.o! Okay just these paragraph u may want to clear up cause they are confusing! Lie to your friends while I ...

I like it and it has some emotion. I think pretty much every one can relate to it. ( If they cant maybe they should put more of them self ...

I really liked it. Your very good writer, so don't stop. It was confusing, but deep. It gave me a lot to think about!

I love it! Its got emotion, and history. It set up the end well. It has a good beginning and end! Good Job!

I like the point of the poem, but it is kind of bland. I only noticed one mistake however, With friends and with enemies life feels kinda tough. Kinda should ...

Okay guys this is just the first like half of a chapter to start my book off. I honestly just need to know if it sucks because I was reading ...