Boolovesyou

United we stand, For I will forever hold you hand, In this graying bliss With your sweetest kiss. We can forever be Together; just you and me No complications, Or ...

Hey Boo here! In the land of white trash, there was a boy who gave a crap. His name was Mark E. Nash, and he just wouldn't shut his trap. ...

Hey! I'm here to review! It drips down walls and Covers the floors and Spreads the scent of Coppery rust. It fills our eyes with Truth and lies, makes Everything ...

Hey guys, I know this poem is still rough, but I worked on it forever and keep drawing a blank. Don’t you think its time? For Me, to stop being ...

Hey! So I know you have lots of reviews I only have one grammatical error I had travelled all the way across the city and decided to go home the ...

Dig it! It was sweet and had a good rhythm but not to much going on! Really nicely done! Good job! She's lying so still As if sleeping at will ...

Every time his parents fought, he ate more than he ought. Ought doesn't sound right. For his emotions he was not ready, so in gym he got too sweaty. Honestly, ...

So this is just something new I tried doing. Feel free to rip it apart into tiny little shreds. Dear heartbreaker, You broke your promises, and made me anonymous in ...

Here I am in the middle of a futile attempt to write something beautiful to place my pencil on paper and put images and emotions to words But in reality ...

Hey, just a quick review here! When you started your stanzas you used the same words over again, and used 'but' too much! Thats all! - Boo

I like the way you used the focus, but then again a lot of people do that. Also you seemed to cut to much of the flower out. I don't ...

Why count the hours, the minutes? Moments, (Sometimes blurry, Sometimes pure) Consume your life at most. Time is merely a number Ticking away from grasp; The moments last. That is ...

photo.JPG Girl named Sydney photo-1.JPG I didn't really like this one. photo-2.JPG Ah. I tried drawing annoyed peach.

I'm not the one who wears a cape Or saves people I'm not the one who has big muscles Or charming good looks I'm not the one who wants revenge ...

Please review this short poem for me! Thanks!