Boolovesyou

Hey Demoness, There were a lot of grammar errors. Say something that will once for all, Proove that I'm fighting for Love, 'cause then I'll kepp going till I fall. ...

Hey! Okay only caught one spelling mistake. To me. We're inseperable Inseparable ; Overall... I think the poem was incredible clique. It seems like the biggest girl problems anymore are ...

Hey! I liked this a lot it seemed a bit clique, but here are two lines that just seem forced. Blown out by the cold, hating winds of hell. Terrorized ...

Hey guys, this is just a starter on my novel idea. I'll probably end up making the first chapter longer, but I needed to see if it even grabs your ...

Hey Deebee! I've seen you posting a lot of stuff lately! Good thing though! Okay only one grammar error. I am but a an useless wretch, a blind, selfish monster ...

Hey Twit! I only caught a few mistakes, but you should probably double check your grammar. Dinner is simple; curry with lots of bread and butter and a rice pudding ...

Hey, Charade. Your poem was cliche, and unique. Some parts I felt like I've heard or read them a bunch of times, while others actually caught my eye. Near the ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this poem! It was beautifully worded and easy to relate to in lots of cases. Okay only a few issues : Oh , how much regret ...

Hey coco! Congrats on this beautiful poem! I really like the way you showed a story, the beauty through the sadness all in one poem. I don't have much to ...

I don't want to be your one-month friend , Nor your back-up friend ! I don't want to be your last option, Just... want a true friend. You had so ...

I Know this is raw. The boy you have to watch Who never shows his heart, Listens to the beats, While slicing down his arms Never enough to bleed to ...

Hey, Boo here! I liked your poem. I only have a few suggestions. 1.) Try some stanzas 2.) You put A LOT of grammar in your poem. Periods and commas ...

Hey, Littleprinces. I'm here to review for you today! I'm going to quote your story, and write in where I see issues or small problems. Even things I like. Here ...

Hey Deebee! First off I'll start with what I didn't like. I know this type of poem they usually don't put much grammar in, but in yours there are barely ...

Hey AmellaCogin! You asked for a review so here I am! This story was interesting, I like the shortness of it! I feel like some how you could put more ...