Boolovesyou

Hey Dreaming, My favorite picture was the bubbles one. As far as the Russian dolls go they all seemed out of focus. Which wasn't an artistic out of focus, just ...

Hey MrsMagic41! I liked this photo a lot. Do you use an editor? Photoshop, Lightroom, Picnik... ect? I feel like you cut off the picture too soon, but I do ...

Hey Twinseed, 147 words, and everyone of them interesting! I have a suggestions, try splitting it into two paragraphs. It was a bit confusing, and maybe I just didn't get ...

Hey Rayneisthename, I liked the prologue quite a bit other then maybe it wasn’t mysterious enough? 1.) I liked this part, but maybe you could add more about what he ...

Hey Cairo! One grammar issues : She stops shaking. The terror disappates. dissipates I really liked yours. It actually told a story, and I loved it. Things are fine with ...

Hey LostMagi42, His name is Tim, and I am Ariana. I really don’t like when people introduce characters like this in a story. Be creative! We fought long and hard. ...

Hey Rememberme, Start off with a few errors: LIke Like you did the morning of you're death, like you did every morning. You looked like a porcelain porcelain doll, so ...

Hey Gossipgirlxoxo, Okay first off what I noticed by just looking at your story, you need more paragraphs. I personally really don’t like it when people put to much into ...

Hey Chosenofair! I really like your poem. It was interesting and I could tell you really thought about it. Well, it seems so anyway. Your words were really beautiful. Good ...

Hey Boo here! Just some corrections! "come to me now" C in come should be uppercase. I noticed you didn't uppercase anything in your poem so I won't point them ...

Hey. I strongly suggest you change this poem from paragraph form. Also change the font. Its quite annoying... Drifting thru through the tides of something I cannot place, my body ...

I Was Here I Lived I Loved I Cared IGive It My All Space needed. I Did my Best Not Becase Of You Because Becase Of God Because I Am ...

Hey Ignatius5453, I liked you poem. It was just overdone and bland. The topic is just over used. Some of your rhymes are almost rhymes or forced rhymes Look outside ...

Hey Laura! James convulsed wildly. He screamed, a hoarse scream doused in grief that burned the back of his throat as it welled inside of Drop the of, especially if ...

Hey Deanie, I just got the feeling of reading a list... It had nice words, but not very poetic. And the only thing that I wanted to read was the ...