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Well I thought that was good. I really liked how you had the intro and stuff at the beginning. It would be weird if the story just started with people ...

This looks really good. I do have a few nitpicks, though: You say the word "procedure" a lot. You could use other words like process, method, or routine. The enhancements ...

It had to fit on one piece of paper for the assignment so I had to make it really short. I think I'm going to write another story that's a ...

This is a short "scary story" I wrote for my language arts class. I climbed through the window and dropped onto the floor of the palace. The only things I ...

I said Legalize because it's a person's choice and that's all there really is to it.

Someone else dislikes his grammar. Yipee!

I'm not a fan of George W. Bush, but he wasn't a bad president. He wasn't a really good president either. He's in the middle for me. He really needs ...

Oh my gosh! You drew this? It's amazing. I might be saying that just because I'm horrible at drawing, but it's still good. Hey, how about a gold star!

Thanks! :D

I don't get it. What boy? What happened to the man? What happened in the beginning? Maybe you could explain it more. Besides that it is great.

Thanks! Do you think I should change Blizzard at the end to Snow or keep it the same?

Snow Falling softly Falling on my face Falling like jellyfish in a light current Covering the trees Like Christmas lights Snow Falling swiftly Falling on my hat Falling like jellyfish ...

I was actually thinking of Arthur dying. That's what I meant by "...fell and bled."

Ursula DeNote Ursula clanged her sword with a vampirate. She twirled the sword out of his hand and drove her's into his chest. She pushed him aside and moved further ...

RRIIINNNGGG! The school bell rang and the children ran out the blue double doors of Franklin Middle School. Stephen Hickernell was one of them. He scampered out of the eighth ...