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Re: Horses
That was really nice! with me being a big fan of horses and all, you did a great job with the metaphors and similes, and they were very creative 7/10 ...
Mar 26, 2007 -
Re: Oak Tree
Oak Tree There was a giant oak tree, in a green grass field. It's branches tall, its leaves so green, and strong bark was it's shield. Squirrels darted here and ...
Mar 26, 2007 -
Re: My room (a poem)
This is really good, keep it up ^.^
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Alone
Alone The darkness is all around me, it slowly consumes me. The joy of being alone, and watching the others on my own. Sometimes people stare, every now and then ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: I slightly edited it, and yeaj. The summer horse
Chapter one I swear if she tells me to shut up one more time, I’m going to blow up! Cassie thought. “Now, as I was saying, matter I –“Her teacher, ...
Oct 28, 2006 -
Re: Do you love me?
Chapter one Kat Dear Dumb Diary, I just got this thing and I have no idea whatsoever of what to write so I will just tell you about my first ...
Oct 27, 2006 -
Re: A Summer Horse
Chapter one I swear if she tells me to shut up one more time, I’m going to blow up! Cassie thought. “Now, as I was saying, matter I –“Her teacher, ...
Oct 27, 2006