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Re: Broken Reflection
Looking into the mirror, I see Something strange that isn’t me; An attractive face and pretty eyes, A vacant soul that I despise. The person looking back at me Is ...
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Re: Title Feedback
Sounds like a comedy about an idiot [hmm. i wonder where I got that?] I'd totally read it, and laugh at all the stupid jokes! 101 ways to live the ...
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Re: Rate the Signature Above You.
8/10 funny! Besides, who do you know that quotes their shirt? -Brooke
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Re: Eclipse
oh my gosh, I'm so sorry, it was just so short and I don't really know tha layout for a haiku, and it just looked like one.. I don't know ...
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Re: Eclipse
I've never been much of a hiku [or however you spell it] fan, but I liked this one. I know this isn't much of a critique as it is more ...
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Re: Inside the game: Final Fantasy 8
I agree with royboy actually, my older brother used to be obsessed with final fantasy And, it does make it a lot better not having it beat the game and ...
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Re: Untitled
Wingless bird, how desperately you call out from your own locked in cage, your once raging power; now not racing at all shrieks disgust the air, but not known as ...
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Re: Sunrise
Flooding the sky With incessant power, Rousing slumbering souls Still grumbling and sour. But what soul abounds Who can stay that way When sun overcomes moon And turns dark into ...
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Re: Luna
PROLOGUE: My name is Luna Soto, and this is my story. I’m presuming that you picked up this book and started to read because you decided that my innermost thoughts ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Hmm... Sounds like someone who's had a troubled life and is fianally accepted into society... I would read it if the summerary was good The truth about mimes [/u]
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Re: More Than Dust
Can a heart be more Than the shell that others see? Can a spirit transcend Its own mortality? Is a mind worth less Than the face it hides behind? Can ...
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Re: Upon A Kiss
I was watching a t.v show and someone said "would you take my breath, if upon a kiss' and this is what I made out of it --------------------------------------------------------------------- Would you ...
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Re: Hello, You Are Real
Hello, You Are Real "Hello, you are real" were the words that caught my eye, I lingered for awhile as my heart wondered why, and it skipped with a beat ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Reminds me of an old romance movie, I'd totally read it, just for fun The Biography Of A Cow
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: ...a e new Dream...
It was alltogether good, you staryed from the topic a little, but even the best of writers do time to time. keep writing! -Brooke
Apr 2, 2007
