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Re: name association
To me, It really sounds like someone from Eragon, one of the Dragon riders, and all of the names all look the same! Can't say much about this one.... Kira ...
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: No Title [conveient, eh?]
This poem has no title, and I wrote it a while back because of what happened to a friend of mine. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Sitting there dep
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: ~Tomorrow~
I wrote this this morning, and it's an idea I got from one of my older poems -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Can you see past tomorrow? When you are st
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: Hope Springs Eternal
This poem uses the double acrostic format, so the first and last letters of each line spell out a phrase. September eleventh: when nightmarish sounds Echoed throughout our globe. Pandemonium ...
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: All Because of Father
This is one of your best poems! but you told me that you edited it to seem that it was about a human, well, I hate to break it to ...
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Umm....oh gosh...erm... I think, an old 70s story of lust, vengance, love, and s**, like, jackie collins style, that takes place in Las Vegas So, I would read it, and ...
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
REminds me of a warriors rip-off, cats saving forest, oh the joy Eric, go to bed
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: Broken 174
This is not anywhere near my best, nor is it even that good at all I was just bored in math and quickly scribbled a little poem ------------------------------------------------------------------------
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
I see that and I think DODGEBALL like everyone knows the story about the kid who's stuck in corner and never gets chosen for a team? Wouldn't even give it ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Blood On The Stage
I've been really deppressed latel, and all I can write is deppressing things.. but anyways, please crit! ------------------------------------------------------------------ A child’s so innocent unti
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Lonely Violin
Lonely Violin Alone in lost, a silent string Bound in firm, in place of wings Holds a loft, this gentle soul As he plays in long, what his heart doth ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Suicidal Depression
As I Run This Blade Threw My Flesh In A Hours Time I'll Be Out Of Breath Lying Still In A Pool Of Blood Know I Lost My One True ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Left Alone
I really liked it, because I'm a sucker for 'no one likes me, i'm all alone' sort of things, because I'm emo like that one thing I did notice was, ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
I get a girl who is totally rejected to the idea of love, and,alas, falls in love.. I probally wouldn't read it, i've seen waaay too many of those.. Ice, ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Hmm... I see that title and immediently think the usual 'girl gets arranged marrige, and runs off to the arms of her secret luv-her" I would read it if the ...
Apr 3, 2007
