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Re: xXxxKareenAxxXx
Kareena swished her long violent purple hair out of her eyes and pulled down the curtains in her room. She squinted as the blinding sun beat down on her as ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Luna -edited-
PROLOGUE: My name is Luna Soto, and this is my story. I’m presuming that you picked up this book and started to read because you decided that my innermost thoughts ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Ode to A Stale Pastry
hahaha! I loved it! It rhymed and flowed well, it sounded natural, like you write stuff like this everyday [i don't doubt you do] Punctuation was great, spacing was good ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
a french teenager story... What AM I doing here [in your arms]
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: No Title, agian!
Hmm... I don't know why I wrote this one, but please crit! ---------------------------------------------------- Your lips are moving, but I hear no sound. It feels as if my world is crashing ...
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: The [Almost] Impossable
I can. I do it every weekend! Type and save the world from evil magicians..... It gets so difficult!
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: I am obsest with cats so...
Even though you've already showed this to me in class, I want to tell you [agian] that I love it. oh yeah, i'm glad you changed the line format, before ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Choices
It's not very good, it kindof died, I realize now I should have chose a diffrent rhyming pattern, but maybe there's still hope for this poem, what can I do ...
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: Gone
Broken shards of glass Lay all around The world is silent Without a sound Dreams, Hopes, Promises Strewn all over the floor There is nothing left In one piece anymore ...
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: The [Almost] Impossable
I can, its so much fun 11.go to sleep with music on
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: The [Almost] Impossable
I do it all the time, and end up drawing what ever it is we're talking about. 7.Singing and writing [almost same thing as listening to music and writing,huh?] [/b]
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: The [Almost] Impossable
i juat can't do it, I get all discordinated and confused and end up falling off the treadmill or dropping the book -_- 5.Watching t.v and talking on the phone ...
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
I immediently see that word as a mix between death & truth, some sort of midevil fantasy saga? Broken 174
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: Dead Love
Aww that was sad -_- I liked it, but you need to fix the punctuation and spacing in there, but other than that, I thought it was really good! ^.^ ...
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: The [Almost] Impossable
I don't know if this will work, or if anyone will reply, but what you do is post one almost impossible [for you] multi-task, and say if you can/can't do ...
Apr 7, 2007
