BookWormOnIce

Great lyrics but you could have replaced most of the words with something more creative. Beautiful boy, I see you standing there And I'm trying not to stare, Pretending I ...

Your dog is so cute and you can barely see the fish

I loved this poem it was really creative and Imaginative. Change my shadow, my shapeshifting thing twist me and bloat me and make me cry, for the beautiful girl no ...

I really enjoyed your poem, it has good poetic devices and spellings but it could be more descriptive but besides that great poem. With so many thoughts swirling in my ...

"Elle wake up! your 15 minutes late, Elle!" I turned around to see my mom tugging at my duvet. "Go away..I dont want to go to school." "You have no ...

Always heard of love but never experienced it. Is there such a thing as true love; or is only a myth? (Too Is it for real? or is it the ...

Your poem is very intriguing, it seems like your talking from experience, your spelling is satisfactory and there is nothing to change about it. Your poem gives great Imagery and ...

The lyrics should be more descriptive, but very strong simplicity "I wanna curl up like a cat around you and just hold you tight" this would be very strange to ...

Material Girl: As we drove out of Maryland, I thought about what Sierra had said "Elle, you are so lucky, fresh start you wont know anyone they wont know you ...