BookGirl

Omg! First off welcome, second, you're story is so cool! I like it very much, how did you come with it? I cannot wait for the next piece of it, ...

Twilight, the movie was not the best though it was great! I just preferred the book. Percy Jackson and The Lightning Thief, the movie was brilliant but Annabeth wasn't the ...

Just one thing, put spaces between paragraphs, I like your story though

Just some small things: 1. Don't abbreviate 2. Use spell check That's it, though I'm really enjoying reading your story

That was really good I really enjoyed, can't wait to read about Harry meeting up with the Dursleys' again!

That was so sweet, I love it! You're doing a great job, seriously.

Very nice but, just one teeny tiny thing, try separating more of it with paragraphs it's very bunched up, but other than that I liked it!

I like it! It's funny and I can't wait for the rest! Your alternate story sounds awesome.

Thanx I really appricate it, I'll fix that up