BookGirl

Very nice but, just one teeny tiny thing, try separating more of it with paragraphs it's very bunched up, but other than that I liked it!

I like it! It's funny and I can't wait for the rest! Your alternate story sounds awesome.

This is great I was always wondered what Voldemort would be thinking in certain situations. And the way you described how he saw Harry was interesting, though you might actually ...

Hey Dragons, I love you story but, and I hate to do this, there's a few small problems. All you need to do is slow the story down a bit, ...

Thanx I really appricate it, I'll fix that up

Chapter 1 You’ve Got To Be Kidding Me What the problem with going to secondary school is, you have to join some sort of group. People like me are rare, ...

Hey , I'm new here, the names BookGirl or Trish. I'm a total bookworm and I have been told I use to many big words and my imagination is too ...