BookGirl

Very nice, I like how you show us the past and the present in this story. The past being how the merchant became a manticore and the present being the ...

Thanks! :)

Chapter 4 We got to what Keenan called the Conference Room. It was the same room that Jon had led me to last night, this time though I took a ...

I understand what you mean, but you see with Alex, she doesn't want to like him, but she can't help it. If that makes any sense. It's instinct for the ...

Very nice, different, something that I do have to say, you went a little fast with Ariel and Gabriel's relationship. When Ariel saw Gabriel's wings shouldn't she have asked questions ...

This is so good. The vamyre actually dies, very nice. Like everyone else noticed, I noticed a few mistakes but those can be edited easily. I loved the ending, you ...

Congratulations!!!!!!!!! :D :D :smt003 :smt003 Wow 3000, that's a big number! Well done, well done, very well done!!! :D :mrgreen:

Thanks so much! And I'll fix that up and sure I'll Pm you ;) BookGirl

Thanks Day! I really appreciate it and Lollipop It's supposed to be weird, that's the whole point ;)

Thanks! I really appreciate it! :)

Chapter 3 I woke up with a small headache. I lifted up my head a little, and noticed that I wasn’t in my own room. My room has blue walls ...

I haven't read Mockingjay, but I have read the first two. This is brilliant, I want to read more! :) You have a really good storyline and you really have ...

Thank you! I really appreciate it!

I think it sounds good, the others have already said everything though ;) I look forward to reading more!

Thanks again!