Bokkaku

This was a prompt game. A buddy and I chose a prompt and we both wrote about it. This is what I saw. --- I always knew my Gramma was ...

I thought I had caught all of those... ^^; It didn't show up on a spell check(I always have a spell check everywhere) because councilor is a word, too. Just ...

Nice little one-shot! And in a clearing that wasn’t there before, they gather in a circle. Could just be me, but you're typically not supposed to start a sentence with ...

Thanks so much to everyone that critiqued the prologue. I hope this chapter turns out better! --- The door was thrust open and a student walked into the classroom, a ...

The kids in my class complain about 350 word assignments. :( One kid in my class complained at 100 words. I laughed until I couldn't breathe.

I brushed my absolutely gorgeous blond hair while I gazed into a mirror, staring at my own blue orbs that stared back at me. "Suzy, you're so gorgeous!" my boyfriend ...

Oh, so many of these I could quote and say, "This! This I do!" But I'll just write my little habits. You know you're a writer when... You greet someone ...

I really like how you start this out. Anyone can relate to it, especially one who's got a love interest while they're reading it. It really makes the reader smile ...

Ahh, I'm a little embarrassed at the fact that you guys are right. Some people mentioned that my characters are a little dull/some of the description is unnecessary. It'll get ...

Oh, wow. Prince charming surely turned into a dirty bastard, didn't he? And Cinderella is now quite the witch. You've definitely twisted the story away from Cinderella a bit more. ...

You have to write more, I beg of you! I read your first installment, and I think the story grows better every time. I have to say, though... sticking her ...

You've got amazing imagery and flow there. I love your point of view, and how you wrote this. There was definitely emotion in here. It could be that I'm tired, ...

Writing itself; writing is amazing! Granted, I love creation, and I love building... and ending comes in as a close favorite. But what gives you more thrill than writing a ...

I have to agree with the others; it is slightly HP-ish, but there was definitely your own twist in there. I'm liking it so far, but maybe a couple of ...

Edited. The trek from the land of the giants the previous night had tired me out. When I awoke, I found myself sprawled out onto my back. Now fully awake, ...