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BobcatPoet

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Lion Hunting

    Excellent work! I like your detail and your commitment to this plot, and further more I would enjoy another Narnia story. Maybe, from the Magician's Nephew, you could create entirely ...

    Jan 1, 2009


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