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Re: Advice
To start off: I'm not into vampires and werewolves, and to tell you the truth, I DON'T EVEN KNOW IF I SPELLED WEREWOLVES RIGHT! Proving my lack of interest in ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Redemption Chapter 1
If it's the first chapter, maybe you should include a little more information. Don't just make it some conversation, but drag the reader right into the story. The first chapter ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Lion Hunting
Excellent work! I like your detail and your commitment to this plot, and further more I would enjoy another Narnia story. Maybe, from the Magician's Nephew, you could create entirely ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Religious Fiction
Barriers and Brothers Jim tried to scream as he was sucked upward. It felt like he was being pressed through a solid flexible barrier. Every pore in his body stung ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: What is Your Favorite Part of Writing?
I particularly enjoy the climax
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: pain
You express your emotions well.
Sep 22, 2008