BobcatPoet

This is great! Somebody should totally make this cartoon parody. I want more :shock: !!!!!!!! *please*

Town of Dissadent Part 1 (Enter characters Adam and Marcus.) Adam: “Ah, what fine day this be, friend. The sows sing, friend and the trees are not one to see ...

Disorders. No one can come to a full understanding of them until they have one themselves. Nobody is perfect, and no body is perfect. The world today focuses too much ...

Write a book. I don't know what else to say except right a book.

I hate them too. Hate, hate, hate, hate, hate, loathe entirley! I use these words well, knowing the strength that rests in them.

This story seems like it has potentiol, but don't forget to keep it as far away from cliche material as possible. Description needs a little work. See if you can ...

Excellent piece of work. Keep going and keep revising. PM me! I love your work!

Loved the whole undead best friend scheme. :)

Very, very, very good for your first post. On a scale of one to ten I give you a nine, but keep in mind that this includes my condolences for ...

Glad to see your novel underway. My best of wishes for its success, but remember though you may write, write, write, and write some more, the most important skill is ...

Videthal reached the doors just as the sun disappeared beyond the dark hills that created the horizon. The majestic plains and trees turned a hue of darkness, and the clouds ...

Remember those defining details that characterize your entire plot, and keep it up :Dl It will turn out if you don't abandon it! Prolouge I am 17, and too beautiful ...

Zinglore Chronicles Part One: Introduction Videthal sprinted between the many gray brick houses of Krondel, his blue cape whirling wildly behind him. The man, appearing too old to make such ...

Very nice, I think this piece of work has potentiol. Just one thing is don't make everything blunt, but make your points in ways that make one who reads engage ...

This is a fairly good concept, and you've managed not to make it boring. The chapters are a bit short, though, but you manage to put something interesting into them. ...