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Touching. Is it based on fact? It feels like its coming from the heart, and i love that. There are one or two things i would change First, We flash ...

Blame a friend, Blame a trend. Blame a beginning Or an end. Blame not yourself, But another, And you my friend Will soon discover, That your doings Are yours alone! ...

Hey Before I start, i am a big reader but i don't review much. Here goes.. Firstly, a few grammatical errors (spelling, etc.), which you will see if you read ...

Now this is a real thinker.. Love the poem, love the message! Good Job. Im pretty new to this stuff. I think that some of your lines could be said ...

Thanks

Blame a friend, Blame a trend. Blame a beginning, Or even an end. Blame not yourself, but another, And you my friend Will soon discover, That Your actions are YOURS, ...

Hey. Really love this work. I think the work is well titled. The cropping effect gives you the feeling that the damage goes far beyond than what is portrayed. This ...

Toli, poetry isn't always about rhyme. Thanks anyhow, dude. Will try to rhyme more. P.s. I've edited it, as you suggested

The little boy came out to play, And immediately wished he hadn't. The giant bullies darted towards him; their evil intentions apparent! They circled him and began to taunt, Using ...

Thanks (ha ha, the rumors were true, what a thrill!) Yea the arms.. Well, its a personal symbolism. I am really thin. Thanks again

Aw man this is neat! I am an aspiring artist. I love painting and .. well.. basically anything that does not involve pencil work. My pencil skills are a little ...

Please write about Biology next. lol Really cool (because it's against Math), although its hard at first to see what you're talking about. Still, it's cool (because its against Math!)

Im an artist, not a photographer. However, photography will help me develop a new angle with my art. I'm in!

People who blindly believe In everything they hear or see, Should throw of the box; And open their eyes; To see and accept reality. Aquarells. I just like the abstract ...

Dramatic. What an ass of a father! I liked it because ... well... I dont really know... Ill get back to you on that one. Not bad for thirteen.. But ...