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This was delightfully creepy. I loved that you gave his motives, as well as lingered on his morals of being an honest barber. It not only gave him depth, but ...

Name: Markuus Flint Age: 16 Gender: Male Appearance: Markuus is a muscular, strong boy, though his life as an orphan and his food runs have made him lean. A medium ...

Name Cameo (nicknamed Cam) Age 15 Gender Female Teacher or Student: Student Appearance first off, she’s tiny. Barely making it to 4’3” and skinny as a twig, she looks disproportionate ...

Two figures entered a dark room, one pulling the other, while the one in tow followed eagerly. The base beat of music came up through the floor, as well as ...

This is amazing. Granted, it is slightly adult for my taste, but that's not really a bad thing. There are a few punctuation problems, but those can be fixed with ...

It's a chapter in my 'Powers' novel. I'm glad you liked it.

I do have to say that this has potential. The intro paragraph really pulled me in immediately. But, it also has a lot of tuning up to do... Firstly, I ...

Welcome to chapter 2! Please read and review (especially review, I'm in dire need of those...). And check out chapter 1 if you like it! “You know what I don’t ...

I'm glad to see this continue so soon! Though I do have to say I liked the first chapter better, this is still very good. A few technical details need ...

First off, I'd like to say that I'm really intrigued by this story. I want to know what happens next, and what significance the girl has in the plot. Though ...

POWERS Prologue: Get up. Eyes opened. Blinked. Saw the sky. Get up. Legs moved. Arms pushed up. Feet stood. Who are you? Can you walk? Legs took a step. Another. ...

Hello, everyone! My online alias is Sky, though you can call me whatever nickname you find fitting. I'm an aspiring novelist who can never focus long enough on one story ...