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Re: Justifying revenge
I liked that. You made the time and place clear. You also made it clear what he was killing without saying it actually was. "A ripple of disgust shot through ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Prologue
Hi Midnight and Confetti, Thanks for reviewing! @Confetti, I see what you mean by it going too fast. I had a similar problem with my last novel - something I ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Title Advice?
Hmm... what's your story about? I like October and The Fall, but the latter is the name of a CHERUB book, which is quite a popular series. One or two ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: {Photography}
I like this photos, especially the 1st, 3rd and 4th. I like those best because the other ones have too much light in the lens. It's too bright! Early morning ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: {Photography}
I like this photos, especially the 1st, 3rd and 4th. I like those best because the other ones have too much light in the lens. It's too bright! Early morning ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: The War of the Swans: Chapter Four: Hang Me Up To Dry
Nice. That was quite nice. You're right, it is a little bit slow, but I was wondering, wouldn't Bella be panicking in her head about what would happen if her ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: The Unwritten | Chapter 2
I liked that! I loved how there was a cliffhanger in both the last chapter and this one. I liked the description at the beginning, but I think it'd benefit ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Photography: Peeking through the Pink Forest
This is 'Peeking through the Pink Forest'. I hope the title fits the photo! This was one of my first attempts at photography. This photo was an experiment, but I ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Um... Er... Hi :)
Thanks everyone! You all made me feel very welcome :) I posted chapter one here: I'll post occasionally as all the next chapters I have are (abysmal) first drafts, so ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Prologue
Hi All! This is the prologue for The Diamond Fist, a tale set in post-revolution Egypt in 2011. It's about the mess that the ex-president creates in order to regain ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: What Is Your Favorite Writing Tip?
Definitely Show, Don't Tell!
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Write the worst poem you can.
. Does that count?
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Um... Er... Hi :)
Well... Hi :) I'm Ahmadblues but feel free to call me Mac :) I'm 14 and I live in cold, wet England :( I like to write novels but I'm ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: 1st person vs. 3rd person?
I'm writing in First person Multiple at the moment. What made me change from Third Person in my last novel to First Person in this was my Best Friend's writing ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: What genre is this?
Now that you mention it, those genres fit pretty well with my story! Thanks guys (and girls)! :) Mac
Aug 1, 2011