BlueShift

Bring Me Down - Lenka

I love writing short stories that symbolize an ideal, an emotion, or a personal perspective. I was inspired to write again by the calamities that rocked my country, the Philippines...here ...

Hi! First of all, I think you've got a very interesting plot here. The tribal setting for an event as mystical as a resurrection also seems perfect to me. However, ...

Hi Kara! :) This is a thoroughly interesting plot. Why, indeed, would such a smart and handsome boy need to pretend he's blind when everything can be at his disposal ...

Hi Rosey! Oh my, that's just fantastic. I thoroughly love works of fantasy seasoned with nice, fluffy romance xD. Have you read The Goose Girl by Shannon Hale? It's a ...

Hi sis! I didn't know you've read Memoirs of a Geisha... beautiful work of historical fiction, no? :D And in my opinion, you are a true poetess :). Your language, ...

Hi! :) My first comment would be about your descriptions. There is a lot of detail about the surroundings, but they don't strongly create an atmosphere proper for the story. ...

I pretend to love Pride and Prejudice, but never actually finished it either. Still, the Kiera Knightley version of the movie never fails to make me completely happy, and so ...

@Explosive_Pen: ah, thank you for noting my problem with tenses @_@. I tend to do that a lot ^_^'. And you're right, Rose's character is lacking depth. Her persona will ...

@bailecielo: haha, well, I can't say this was really drawn from experience. I don't think I had ever been so dejected as Rose :). @Hannah: wow, that's a great review ...

This is such an original, well-written story :). It was engaging all throughout. Descriptions are good, and your two characters are well-defined. You've made the topic of love very complex, ...

@Hannah: Oh, well, I suppose I prefer to remain disillusioned and think Hannahs are meant for greatness xD. Oh, Jane Eyre is also one of my favorite novels ever! :D ...

This is a great theme for a short piece: the timeless conflict between the creatures of nature and the indifferent, destructive humans. It's a topic that can be explored in ...

@bailecielo: Hi sis! haha, yeah, that was funny xD we get lost even online :D @Hannah: I suppose it's a good sign for my writing career to have the same ...

You must hate the Stephenie Meyer books with a passion. *high fives* Ah, much of what I write is also fueled by music :D. Nothing like a nice song to ...