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A very good little poem. You have shown a great vocabulary and ability to contruct your phrases. Well done! :)

Hey guys, Thanks for the advice, it is truly appreciated :) One thing I want to comment on though is about the statements that I didn't provide enough imagery or ...

Hey guys! :) Thanks so much for the advice. I agree with your point Ray112, that I should change the title to a plural so it matches the context of ...

Through pain and suffering, loss and tragedy, bravery and honour, love an heartbreak come our heroes. They don't wear a red cape, nor can they fly, but under our nations ...

I really, really like this poem. It is bitter and full of emotion which is what I love the most. My main concern is the length; it gets to the ...

This poem is certainly very sweet :) And I liked the nice little message to your friends at the end. My only concern is the cliche` side of things. There ...

Wow. I really like this poem! I love the way you have shown all the different points of 'break' in a relatioship, both the good and the bad. You used ...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ They are empty of sorrow and abandoned by truth. A cheat to the bone and a liar to the heart. How ar

This poem is beautiful. You have chosen a wonderful part of nature to describe and have definitly done it justice. You tied it up nicely at the end. I also ...

WOW! This is an amazing poem (seriously, take this as a huge compliment; I don't usually rave about poems like this). You have such a deep insight to a wonderful ...

Hi! Your poem was good but I do agree with the points that the previous review made that it got a bit repetitive and the dashes were annoying which meant ...

Wow; definitly an odd concept but I can see the metaphoric message between the lines. Its is a good poem as it is written simply to communicate an idea that ...

Those eyes of yours glistened beautifully, even in the darkest of nights. Your laughter echoed down the halls of this lonely home, even whilst tears emerged on your face. You ...

HEY! Good to see you on YWS!!! Cant wait to read more of your poems (you better put more on)! I remmember doing this haha, good times. I dont actually ...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hey, You'll probably be annoyed at this pointless comment but I'm going to do it anyway. I have noth