Blossom

Omg you are amazing! Thats all I have to say. -Blossom :)

You asked for no more comments but I couldn't help myself!! :P all i'll say is that it is so pretty! :) -Blossom xx

Narrow-minded I shall never be; black and white I won't ever see through. Grey inbetween many find comfort; but I cannot live in such a misty haze. I search for ...

Absolutly amazing! I honestly mean it when I say this is the best piece of work I have read on this site! You had me glued from the beginning and ...

Wow! This is great :) and you say it is your first poem so that makes me even more impressed! You ability to compose with rythme is shown and certainly ...

Subdued by the haze of misery, with a heart clamped to the longing of love, you sweard you couldn't fight it. You hoped so mountain high, as you heard her ...

Very good! You should be proud of your work :) I'm not an expert with this so I don't really have any worthwhile advice- just know that I definitly enjoyed ...

HI! Nice poem you have here :) The last two lines I found particularly gripping- very clever! The rythme was good and it is clear that you have your own ...

Hi! Great poem! I particularly admired your vocabulary which you used wisely, adding emphasis to your most defining lines, supported with a bit of light and shade in you sentence ...

[i]Half this age, I was captivated by the simplest of things, with only monsters under the bed to fear. Double this age, I suspect life will just pass me by, ...

Hey! Love the poem! Is a great idea and was sad in a sort of breath-taking way. My advice- you should find an alternative word for 'world'- it kind of ...

HEY! This is a good poem- I like the concept! 'Goodbye to Goodbyes'... certainly a thought-provoking title. One thing I would like to advice you on is to not use ...

Halo send me down, let the light of this daydream leak to the ground. May the tranquility of my stream of memories pave me a path to serenity. It seems ...

Before you continue reading this you should know that this piece isn't a novel nor a sequence of short strories, but more a written interpretation of the world I inhabit. ...

The ideas behind your storyline is interesting but your communication of it is a bit to casual. You need to either phrase everything in a poetic form or have it ...