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Here you go Texan Gary~~ The scene changed again, the glowing city streets, and burning fire left, and a spawn a new darker image. It was a small room, dark, ...

Guys if you just tell me a basic idea for what you want your character to go through, or an actually full prophecy, I'll have Gary see it. And if ...

Guys, can someone have the guard say that David escaped, because I made that so the guarding would be lessened, and David would be able to sneak the others out ...

I'll bring ferret boy in during the escape, if that's okay.

I guess I'll make up a future to post. Tell me if this is okay Gary~~ The darkness curled around me, the room spun around me, slowly morphing. It opened ...

David~~ "Oh no, Oh no," I heard someone shout. "What," one of the guards said. "cell 1 is empty, a partial has escaped!" the shouting guard said. "You mean David? ...

DSF: I'm not asking you to change anything on your post, but next time keep in mind, Cole isn't someone easy to shut up, and would be talking back to ...

Sorry if I got him wrong, but from earlier I got the feeling he had a somewhat short temper, and with David as sort liking to get on nerves, I ...

Okay bolt this is how I see were they are so you don't think I'm crazy center edge of the iland their there about ten miles of land down from ...

Jok I'll just go off your post, but have it changed a bit, to make it fit more the setting of the prison David-Electric eel (apparently more closely related to ...

"Jok, remember, there is water on the other side of the fence as well. So after he jumped, he would have to swim 750 yard, he can't run on water, ...

Okay, so I'll post has me and John left the gym to escape. David~~ After the little escape with John I hopped he would now get with the program and ...

Well I wasn't trying to sound mean, its hard to display emotion when your typing. If i had said that, and you heard it, I would have sound calm and ...

Okay, but can you still change the electric fence thing. And The reason it did not make much sense was because they were all away from the main thing, and ...

Jok two things. One, how would John know right away what they were talking about, when he wasn't even there. Try making it more realistic, so it makes sense how ...