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First off, I agree with Sela. You need a better opening, something that draws the reader in more. I always find the word job making me think beck to reality ...

Kamas actually said she dropped out, so Hiding is still open.

Name: Nathan Valour Age: 17 Situation/History: With his particular ability Nathan has replaced every bad memory has had with a pleasant one. He does sometimes get "flashes" of his real ...

I quite likes The Supernaturalist book over here. Quite looking forward to the next up coming book of it.

I find it impractical for myself to write long hand. Mostly because my handwriting is unreadable, and so I can't edit, re-read, or copy it. I do however like to ...

Blueberry tea Hmm, now I must have this tea. Darn my love of blueberry anything.

Shane "Yeah, mostly, depends what," I told him "Well, lets just say some nasty blow to some heads, and a few other incidents," he said, nervously. "So some deaths and ...

Connor "Death?" I asked, it was hard to tell with my shades on, and smoke hovering around me. She nodded. "Good, come on, we have to break through that wall, ...

I know, lets pretend like he didn't :wink:

Okay, David never hung up in my last post. David As soon as they went inside I pressed the speaker button, luckily Mel forgot to hang up the phone as ...

There were others listening to the phone call, so if anyone wants to continue after me. Mike "Its because I'm a psycho " He said, the word psycho was heavy. ...

I'm gonna have Marrow catch on fire for the find out Marrow/ Connor Sirens roared, and I saw fire trucks, police, and ambulances charge down the road. Trouble was a ...

David As I walked back to my cabin, I set an email up, so at any moment the whole school would get Mel on their screens. I walked past a ...

Sounds good. Maybe they could see something big on the news that requires heroes, leading them into trouble to change and help?

David "Well, this always has been a favorite of mine," I said. "After awhile ago, looking at the same thing gets a bit dry. Still enjoyable but something fresh would ...