BlondieMissyAngel

Hey Bro! "But then again, if this actually works, you really shouldn't begin a sentance with the word "but" especially a paragraph. I say get rid of it and capitalise ...

Lupis, What I haven't clarified, but what you will find out later in the story is that this "Prologue" is actually a snippet of a different chapter so with that ...

Hey there LastPaladin! I'm Missy! ok.... WOW! STUNNING work! I have to say that I love the way this is written, it has been said before that there's always beauty ...

Hehe thanks Sakura! GREAT idea about the men and children! I'll fix it right away! When i was writing that bit it didn't sound the way I wanted it to ...

Hey there EternalSleep, First of all, what a funny reason to write a song!! XD Now just a few things... A) what's with all the "..." action happening? if you're ...

Amiria!” Someone shouted in the distance. I sighed, why couldn't I be alone for more than a few minutes? “AMIRIA!" The voice of the woman was getting closer. Ugh. "Over ...

Yes and no. I was thinking more like a Lord of the Rings story, with the same main objective and the different stages of achieving that objective change slightly in ...

Dear ziggiefred, Thank you so much! Your review really helped and I hope that the corrections that I have now made help the story to be more gripping. I would ...

Hey bluewaterlily, LOVE the idea of a dragon story! So far with the prologue it's very captivating and had me wanting to read more! Well done with that! a few ...

Truth This is a really interesting poem. However there are a few things I don't understand. The wall can be overcome easily what wall are you refering to? is it ...

Hey Sweetie! First I should say that I really loved this chapter, it is, in a way, beginning a new adventure for Hazel although right now she doesn't know it. ...

All I could see was a blur of colour whizzing by me. I could hear only the crunching of the dead leaves beneath my feet and the wind howling in ...