BlondieMissyAngel

Hey, This was a really emotional story, I could tell through the writing that it's a real life situation and that you went through pain when this was happening. What ...

Hey guys, feel free to leave a comment. This isn't anything personal to me, just a random scene that I made up. feel free to leave and honest opinion!

I pulled off a few hours before sunset, into secluded cove where I began to build a fire to keep me warm and ward off curious animals. While it was ...

The wind gently tugging, At the tips of my hair My eyes closed Tears stream down my face Like a salty waterfall Winding its way down a smooth surface Without ...

hehe Sakura, The reason Amiria keeps calling her Grandfather by his name is kind of to show respect. Even though he IS her grandfather, he is also the chief. The ...

Chapter One, the True Beginning You can leave this out. We already know this information Felix Windbow was hunting when the tale begins of course he was when the tale ...

I stared at my grandfather awestruck, praying that he just pulling my leg. Of course as was my luck, he wasn’t. Panic struck me like a lightning bolt and my ...

Tiger, ok how's this new version? I added some things to it! Let me know!

To my brother, whilst telling me the errors that Microsoft Word has found helps ME, it won't help you. look through to find mistakes YOU see then make sure that ...

hey Nike, looking for his belowed , Hermonie. I think you mean "beloved" He hasn't eaten for hours, because you were working in past tense before this should read, "He ...

Hey there Bickazer! I must say this was great! His arm was broken and a few of his ribs cracked. I think you can use more discriptave words here for ...

Hey Ziggie! Thank you so much! I was thinking that it all looked a bit mushed together I just wasn't sure as to what I could do to fix it! ...

Thanks for the review Blue! Well I made some changes so tell me what you think! Regards ~Missy~

Hey there! Ok I gotta say I love this chapter. It's not just a load of random nonsence. I enjoy how you tell it as it is. What she's thinking, ...

Hey Blue! hope the re-edited version is better! Regards ~Missy~