BlondieMissyAngel

Hey there! I really enjoyed reading this! here are a few flaws, i hope you don't mind I just don’t really understand. I try to add all the bits up ...

Hey sweetie! GO TEAM YELLOW~ so here's my suggestions I herded the sheep into the pen. is the pen small, big, wooden, metal? discribe it more “I’m done my chores ...

I really enjoyed reading this but I did find it a bit choppy. How did Madison know all that? It was almost as if she had practiced it all. I ...

"Amiria! Amiria wake up! Amiria can you hear me? AMIRIA!!!!" Astor's voice was drifting further away, I couldn't remember anything before then. All I was able to do was lay ...

I enjoyed this chapter alot but I feel as if there is pleanty of room to dive deeper into the conversation and Ashton's feelings and thoughts as this conversation is ...

Hey okay so Love love love! I'm really into the whole identity mystery thing but i think it's sorta like that Cinderella Story movie with Hillary Duff except instead of ...

Hey there =] So to start off i just wanna say that this is a very interesting story so far. You used very good word choices and I think that ...

Thanks so much for the review =] if I may ask why it was confusing at the beginning... have you read any of the other chapters? Thanks again *Blondie*

Hey sweetie, oh my word this is like super awesome! =] I love it cause I can really relate to it. When I was in 7th grade i told my ...

I was five years old when a warrior named Kalani ran into my grandfathers cave panting,his face pale, blood smeared on his clothing. I didn't know what was going on ...

Hey hey hey angel face! I really loved this chapter! In all honesty I DO think it coupld use a little work. Grammer, spelling etc. Minor details that youp got ...

It's Friday Friday gotta get down on Friday everybody's looking forward to the weekend!

Hey Cookie, TEAR TEAR TEAR talk about friken hectic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey guys, The reason this poem didn't flow is cause it's ment to be like her life was/is. It's choppy and doesn't fit together nicely. I don't know if I'm ...

hehe love it!