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Re: We Were Once Strangers
Wow, I really enjoyed this, Gahks. An original idea, made me think, I love poems that do that. We were once strangers, souls set on a collision course in the ...
May 25, 2008 -
Re: My Inner Child Likes Chocolate
I like this. Cute and at the end, thought-provoking. Also not cliche like smorgishborg said. She reads A. A. Milne upside down, dad’s glasses on her nose, then will recite ...
May 24, 2008 -
Re: Bridezillas
Haha, surprise ending! I love those. Fun, cute piece, not a lot of substance, but I like it. The southern "touch" makes it a little unique. :] The ending was ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: I Might Weave a Wondrous Web
Untitled I might weave a wondrous web Of silky lexicon, Or blossom thoughts like flowers full— Ideas from a bud— But spidery homes are better yet In deigned complexity, And ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Wannabe
Hi, RedWing, newbie here, so hope I do ok. Overall impressions: I can really feel your frustration in this poem - a good sign. I think we all know the ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Dear Mr. Publisher
Hi Eimear, this is my first review (I think?), so bear with me. :] I like this idea: cute, child-like, pretty original, easy to understand. Although your lack of meter ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: I am Twiggy :] Very happy to be here!
There is a lot to look at on here, and I haven't really had time to poke around. Where do you suggest I start first? The tips for writers looks ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: I am Twiggy :] Very happy to be here!
Yeah, I've read one Agatha Christie novel (can't remember the title at the moment) and I think a movie based off one of her works...I've also read many Sherlock Holmes ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: I am Twiggy :] Very happy to be here!
Thanks for the quick replies! Suzanne: Thanks, harsh is good, I agree. And believe me, my poetry needs the harshness! lol IMP: I adore Emily Dickinson. :D In fact there ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: I am Twiggy :] Very happy to be here!
I am Twiggy, 17, write mostly poetry. I try my hand at short stories, but they usually have no plot to speak of, lol Have been wanting some good, constructive ...
May 20, 2008
