BlondeTwiggy

This is too funny. Hmm, I wonder if you will ask that friend for writing ideas again :D It sounds so serious and somber until the last line, like a ...

Thank you for all the lovely replies, I really appreciate it. I used a dash at the end of the first stanza because it is an adverb clause and should ...

No, I like it short. The shorter the poem is, the better, in my opinion. Leaves us wondering...and leaves it open for interpretation. Sometimes it's better not to spell everything ...

I marvel at the work of men: That silver ’scrapers grand And bubbled crowns of Capitols, Or minarets, still stand— But what are they compared to pines Or God’s domed ...

This is cute! Add pictures and it could be a children's book or something. :] I don't know about rhyme, as some have suggested, I think it's great how it ...

Um, I think the point of reviewing is to give constructive feedback, not insulting and rude feedback. :]] Your poem is seriously not that bad, bisquit. I think trees are ...

Wow, that's a little...pessimistic. :]] I also go through the same feelings (don't we all?) that my poetry must be halfway decent, then I read one of the great poets ...

Oh, I love this. I think sonnets must be hard to write, at least for me, but yours is very descriptive. I think there is a spelling error (colied? Coiled, ...

Thank you for the kind reviews, everyone. :D October Girl...Thank you lol and it's okay about the quote thing...sometimes it can be a pain. I am flattered by your comments. ...

Haha, I like this. So it took him all day to answer? Wow. And the ending, that was really unexpected (another thing I love in poetry). She didn't marry him ...

Blank verse is unrhymed iambic pentameter, unless the definition has changed without my knowing it. :]] I think a better description for "Away" would be free verse. Inspiration can come ...

Interesting...I'm trying to figure this out metaphorically. Does the golden bird stand for someone or something? An authority figure, perhaps, someone abusive? And why does he wish for a dance? ...

Wow, I have to comment on this :] It was intense, almost made me cry, really, you have worded it so well. The meter is off in some stanzas, but ...

I like this. Kind of saw the ending coming, but I like it. :]] The beginning is interesting and makes one want to read more. The story isn't focused on ...

If you remain a tiny rose Alone behind the log— A Tree, immense, denies the rain— You’re motionless in fog— Despair you not: for soon the Sun Will with the ...