Bladesmith

(This is rated based on the content of the novel as a whole rating of each individual chapter may very) Prologue “To arms! To arms! We are under attack!” the ...

Alright, sounds good to me. the only other thing i can think of that kind of has me confused is the nature of damions character. he was the one you ...

well done. Personally I would have not had them outline exactly where (what floor, etc.) they would be escaping by. I think that it could help contribute to the dark ...

I'm not a big poetry person, but i really like this. It strikes a chord with those who have been through something like that. I dont know if this is ...

Thanks. Actually i didnt put an edge on it because i was displaying it at a fair with little kids XD. for any of you in CT i have been ...

Yep, made the sheath too though a friend painted the dragon. Thanks everyone! right now im making a messer (a single edged one handed sword that is really just a ...

there we go. i had to adjust the size (it showed up huge o_O)

Hello. as my screen name suggests i am a bladesmith ( some one who makes knives and swords ). I saw this section and figured it might be cool to ...

Absolutely awesome! Hilarious in a morbid and sickening way, which is strange but pleasing. Maybe i missed it, but why were they heading through the garden in the first place?

So far this is turning out to be an awesome story. You did a great job of keeping the action up in part 2 to keep the reader hooked. When ...

Yep ^_^ I started teaching myself about two years ago. most people take classes with a master bladesmith or some sort of lessons, but ive taught myself using only the ...

Just clearing something up. I will admit i'm a weapons freak (yes i have a forge, anvil, etc. and make my own swords). You said "needle sharp" point of the ...

The beginning is good, very good. Nice powerful description (reminds me of the way old legends tell of monsters). The end though is definitely a case of telling and not ...

I will be completely honest. You just made my day. I just finished watching Inception again before i logged on and read this. Dreams! (enough said i think). Other than ...

It needs to stop! it has gone on too long! I have seen countless maps of fictional worlds and lands and the majority are horribly thought out! There are square ...